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 critique my gallery! 284 views  •   620 days ago
lownine equine     •  9,638 career posts  
hellooooo pb!
its a new year, and i wanna try to improve my dA gallery more. so, what do you love about my gallery? what do you hate about it? all i want is honestly, i dont mind if it comes off a little mean, i dont care if its not super constructive, heck im not even bothered if you know nothing about photomanips at all.

are my concepts too repeditive? too boring? too dark? have i just hit a wall? do i do too much OC art stuff? do i not do enough OC art stuff?

click here for my gallery

+100k for every critiquey comment posted here cos honestly im desperate

tysm T~T
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I think some more 'light'/'bright' manips could help spruce it up. You do have a strong tendency for darker/night sky manips (who am I kidding so do I) so some more lighter ones like Hansha could help add more variety!
You have a real strong grasp of character art, though I would love to see some more 'complicated' designs to really show off your color changing and design strengths.
I adore the visions you are able to bring through, Youre Only Made of Moonlight specifically.
While you don't have a huge gallery, you can definitely see the progression and improvement in each!
I personally love the OC art, and I mean if you ever want more practice with them you know where to find me ;)

Perhaps try looking at some photographs or paintings for inspiration for concepts to pull from? I have a bad habit of going to pintrest and creating collections of inspiring things for when I get bored with concepts xD
 
b a n r i g h    MOD   •  21,572 career posts 620 days ago
 
I love your work! A lot of it is on the dark side, but your background choices and horse stock go so well together. Keep up the good work :)
 
Gems Vineyard Stables    online  •  3,220 career posts 620 days ago
 
nessie u rite, idk dark has always been so easy for me but i should probably challenge myself more xD imma steal ur designs more and surprise u with stuff xD i tend to cleanse my gallery once a year or so and remove my least fav/least popular pieces of the year

tysm gem!! *insert heart here cos i cant remember how to do them on pb xD*
 
lownine equine     •  9,639 career posts 620 days ago
 
Wow I love your horseman if the apocalypse manip. Would have been perfect for my Titan thatís exactly the theme I used. Loves what I saw in both the lighter and darker themes.
 
I am counting on God     •  5,780 career posts 620 days ago
 
aw thank you! i keep thinking of going back and finishing that whole project but its so daunting ;w;
 
lownine equine     •  9,641 career posts 619 days ago
 
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