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A Fallen Dream
 By CherryRoxx   •   26th Jan 2011   •   4,027 views   •   26 comments
Horse Racing'Hush, Dream!' I whispered as I finished brushing down Dream, my beautiful silver mare. Checking the gear was all on, I stepped out of the stables and onto the track.

I was blown away by the noise - people cheering and waving their bets. Somewhere amongst it all a commentator yelled, And finally, here's young Kat, with her horse Dream! I don't think anyone expected to see such a young rider in the final of the Derby.'

As we approached the gate Dream seemed calm, trotting smoothly and hardly flinching. But I felt like I was going to be sick. 'You'll do great.' I heard my mum's voice echo in my mind.

I mounted Dream, slightly comforted by her calmness. But as we stepped into the gate I felt a wave of panic. My blood was pounding in my ears so loud I couldn't here, time seemed to slow. Suddenly the gate swung open! Startled, I dug my heels in and Dream was racing, faster than I could have hoped for. Every moment I thought I was going to be sick. What was I doing?

Then I heard the commentator scream, 'and Kat's in first place! She could actually win!' Suddenly I realized that me and Dream were winning! It was all going so great. We were so far ahead...Then there was a yell, and suddenly there was a girl chasing her dog. Right in front of me. How they even got there I don't know, but I screamed and Dream swerved. I tried slowing her down, but she was going so fast.

We were going straight into the barrier. There was a loud crunch, and I was flung off of Dream as she stumbled and fell, the barrier piercing into her. I could here yells, and Dream let out a piercing scream. Blood and dirt sprayed my face as I crashed to the ground, skidding along. Dream must have skidded a bit too, but all I could see were red circles appearing before my eyes as I slipped out of consciousness.

'Kat?? Kat?' a voice came to me through the darkness. I opened my eyes, and relaxed as I saw my mum. 'What is it?' I croaked, sitting up before yelling in shock.

I was in hospital. My injuries resulted in fractured ribs and a broken arm.

1 week later...
My mum wheeled me into the stable. 'She's in there.' She pointed at Dream's stable, leaving me there. She left while I wheeled myself gently in.
'Oh, Dream!' I whispered. She lay there, eyes dull, coat ungroomed and dried blood splatted on her leg. Or, what had been her leg. Now, in place of her right front leg was a large, swollen stump.

Seeing her like that, I wanted to cry. Easing myself out of my wheelchair, I sat next to her and buried my face into her's. 'We're gonna get each other through this.' I whispered, as I started to cry.
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Weber98  
Great Story Cherry!
  Jan 26, 2011  •  2,079 views
 
Breegirly  
Soo sad, loved it though!
  Jan 26, 2011  •  2,080 views
 
Estella Noire  
Awesome story! Will there be more?
  Jan 27, 2011  •  2,251 views
 
Finally There  
Aww this made me cry just about! AMAZING!
  Jan 27, 2011  •  2,156 views
 
Starry Eyes  
its too sad :(
  Jan 27, 2011  •  2,161 views
 
Pink Pony  
good story :)
  Jan 27, 2011  •  2,168 views
 
Painted Destiny  
Great Story! I hope there is a Part two.. :)
  Jan 29, 2011  •  2,157 views
 
CherryRoxx  
Thank you all so much for your comments - I'm working on a sequel, though whether it'll be as good as you think this one is I don't know!!
  Jan 30, 2011  •  2,256 views
 
Always  
That is an amazing story!!!! Are you going to write more?
  Jan 31, 2011  •  2,302 views
 
Emma Watson  
great story but it remindes me of my pony how had to be put down (sighs) and is it true??
  Feb 2, 2011  •  2,255 views
 
TickehLikesPolo  
really good story
  Feb 3, 2011  •  2,350 views
 
Pdeletedpp  
great will you make part 2? is that a true story????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
  Feb 3, 2011  •  2,246 views
 
Set Free  
Wow that is an awsome story I hope there is going to be a second part.
  Feb 4, 2011  •  2,299 views
 
Seven Sins  
great story
  Feb 4, 2011  •  2,247 views
 
Pintie  
Awesome Story!
  Feb 4, 2011  •  2,258 views
 
JogRunJog  
Awesome story! You have talent!
  Feb 7, 2011  •  2,453 views
 
Spaztastic  
:( So sad, I hope there will be more !!!
  Feb 7, 2011  •  2,254 views
 
Dark Pride  
amazing story.
  Feb 9, 2011  •  2,272 views
 
Milly  
Amazing story, can't wait for more!
  Feb 10, 2011  •  2,288 views
 
Little Bitty Farm  
What a great and sad story!You did a wonderful job!
  Feb 10, 2011  •  2,283 views
 
Simplicity  
that is an amazing story Cherry well done
  Feb 11, 2011  •  2,244 views
 
Mutley Jackson  
MORREEE MOOORRRRREEEEEEE
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MMMMMMMMM
OOOOOOOOO
RRRRRRRRR
EEEEEEEEE
  Feb 11, 2011  •  2,244 views
 
Little Bitty Farm  
I really loved it!Great job!
  Feb 12, 2011  •  2,283 views
 
Spaztastic  
Amazing story, I hope theres more!!!
  Feb 17, 2011  •  2,256 views
 
Simplicity  
really good story
  Feb 22, 2011  •  1,778 views
 
Little Bitty Farm  
Great story!
  May 9, 2011  •  1,958 views
 
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