Can You Hear Me? - Part 11 - The End
 By Unique   •   8th Oct 2011   •   2,984 views   •   14 comments
Horse StoryOne year and two months later Mac slid a sparkling wedding band onto my finger. It was the promise that he would love me forever, love me for always. Always hear me and never forget me. He would always believe in me, and hold me when I was afraid. Always be there and never give up on me. No matter what, I was his and he was mine.

Sym stood behind me the whole time. Nipping at my hair during the ceremony in the middle of his paddock. I wore a white sundress and Mac was dressed in his blue jeans and cowboy boots and his black plaid shirt. It was a small wedding, only my mother, father and Mac’s grandfather was there. My father had moved to Rhode Island in New England and I had been living with my mother up until the day Mac and I were married. The day Mac had expressed to me his love was the day Sym and Mac had also become best friends. You see, Sym and I were exactly alike. We had the same personality, we were connected somehow. When I finally gave in to loving Mac, Sym gave in. When I trusted Mac, Sym did. Sym was happy when I was happy, sad when I was sad. Even though Mac heard me, Sym heard me first.

I planned on competing in Cross Country with Sym as soon as possible. But, I mostly rode him bareback. He was my sunshine, my only sunshine. Because I stepped out on a limb and trusted Mac, Sym did also. Now Sym wasn’t afraid of men, and people in general. When Mr. Harris’ children and their children came to visit they often had pony rides on Sym. Though Sym wasn’t a pony that was for sure. He was a sixteen point three hand Thoroughbred stallion. Sym, was a champion. I was a champion. We were champions.

This was my story on how to live, how to trust, how to dream and how to love. All because, someone heard me.
*sniffles* Write again Unique! I LOVE your stories!!!
  Oct 8, 2011  •  2,274 views
Stay Untamed  
Sweet ending! I agree with Madeira- write another awesome story!!!
  Oct 8, 2011  •  2,317 views
yay!! So great! Make another! MAKKE ANOTHER!!!
  Oct 8, 2011  •  2,275 views
T W I  
You're a very talented writer. :)
Loved the ending!
  Oct 8, 2011  •  2,338 views
Oh my goodness. I love your stories!
  Oct 9, 2011  •  2,278 views
More stories!
  Oct 9, 2011  •  2,276 views
Prarie Rose  
Such a beautiful story! I loved every bit of it. :)
  Oct 9, 2011  •  2,327 views
I'm actually crying! I never want it to end xxx
  Oct 9, 2011  •  2,504 views
All That Jazz  
Love the ending.
  Oct 10, 2011  •  2,289 views
O my word. I can't believe its over :'( You should write a book !!!
  Oct 11, 2011  •  2,296 views
Aslans Roar  
*WA:HAHAAAAA!!* *Balles eyes out* *Snif* *snif*
  Oct 21, 2011  •  2,307 views
Sky Caballos  
OMG!!! i love ur stories!!!! write more! write more!!
  Oct 30, 2011  •  2,295 views
I love it!!!!!
  Nov 7, 2011  •  2,275 views
Sapphire Flames  
YAY!! write more, you have so much talent! the emotion in your writing is amazing.i can tell you put your all into it, which is what a good author should do.
Three cheers for this story! :D
  May 17, 2012  •  2,286 views
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